SuzyShearer<p><a href="https://mastodon.au/tags/writerscoffeeclub" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>writerscoffeeclub</span></a> 28 May. Have you ever done a writing mentorship? What was your takeaway? (long - sorry...lol)</p><p>Way before Covid I very, very reluctantly accepted being a mentor to 8 aspiring authors for 3 months via Zoom. It was stressful (not only because I'm ASD & freak out around people) but now I'm happy I did it.</p><p>My takeaway was be honest with them. Explain the pitfalls. Discuss grammar, head-hopping, etc. Appreciate their efforts and encourage them without putting them down.</p><p>Three had done previous classes with mentors and given unrealistic expectations of how successful they'd become as writers. How much money they’d make, how easy it was to get traditionally published, etc. One was even told to submit their one work to a publisher.</p><p>He gave it to me to read. It was filled with so many errors - grammar, so much head-hopping, spelling, impossible movements of characters (for example in one scene the heroes’ feet were in one place facing north while they were touching something approx. south & 4 metres away). The list went on and on.</p><p>But the actual story was interesting and together we fixed things, tightened it up, and used it as a learning aid for the other seven.</p><p>I did hear a few years back he submitted it to several places but, although he was given encouraging feedback, it wasn’t taken up.</p>