RS, Author, Novelist, Prosaist<blockquote><p><a href="https://eldritch.cafe/tags/WordWeavers" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>WordWeavers</span></a> 2025.05.23 — Have you made up any swears or unique sayings for your characters? CW: Crude Language, duh.</p></blockquote><p>There is almost never an opportunity to use conventional or "modern" foul-mouthed language in any of my stories because there is no connection to 19th-21st century Earth. In <em>Mars Needed Women,</em> one character just uses the word <em>asshole;</em> his using it comes off as very quaint since he's a rough character now in his early fifties (but still sexy), talking about how awful he was when young. There are plenty of other made up or repurposed words, but no defined martian "swears." Instead, here is May Ri listening to her daughter:</p><blockquote><p>The teenager, her green eyes sparkling with the same fire her father's eyes often evidenced, explained what she meant in great <em>unvarnished</em> detail. The words "hypocrites" and "misogynists" featured along side <strong>martian swear words that made May Ri's ears burn.</strong> Mari had <em>studied</em> her father's "situational" rhetoric thoroughly.</p></blockquote><p>In the Reluctance Series, I make up "words." But first, for those who have followed me long enough to have learned about the <strong>devil girl,</strong> she's funny in that if someone is about to swear, she warns, <em>"Language!"</em> In most contexts (mob, prizefighter, "princess"), whomever she says this to abides, or regrets it if they don't.</p><p>The following words may seem like cheats, but give them a moment to sink in before you conclude that. It's amazing how quickly a reader can get used to even nonsense when it has a definite context.</p><p>While these are day angel slang, Thorn Rose uses them without much situational awareness (she's a daemon). Day angels have feathered wings and control surfaces, double-shoulders and extra joints to make it work, and use reluctant forces to let them fly. There's also night angels—too many spoilers there—but day angels so far are portrayed as lower class. These "swears" come from them; bear in mind, <em>these people are very human.</em></p><p><em>Flap</em> v. as in, "Are you <em>flapping</em> crazy?" or intr. "<em>Flap it all!</em>" Not a synonym for sexual intercourse, but it does imply getting hit up side the head with a feathered wing. It serves the purpose. </p><p>I originally used in a teen-rated YA!</p><p><em>Flap and fluff</em> n., NSFW originally involving wings and someone male, but you can use it generally for what's implied. 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