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#PennedPossibilities 730 — 2nd Anniversary Edition: Share a blurb, summary, or tiny snippet explaining your WIP to everyone in the hashtag.

Congratulations, @floofpaldi Two years of prompts is pretty dang amazing! Since you were asking for a tiny snippet explaining my WIP, I actually got pulled to a steamy single paragraph that oddly puts the book into perspective (or so its author would claim). I decided that without permission, I'd not post that to the hashtag. 🫣

This instead here's a blurb providing the gist (maybe) of a novelette I'm trying to get started, which is taking up my head space at the moment.

Bolt was framed for murder and forced to fly messages for the mob; she wonders often if going to prison might have been the better choice. She's blacked out her memories of bad things for a dozen years. She lives for the rare moments she grabs for her street photography—the capturing of the faces and the camaraderie of a normalcy her stupidity denied her. When a newspaper reporter breaks his camera and Bolt is hovering at the scene of a weird disaster, with a perspective to see more than she should, her quirky photos end up on the front page and seem a ticket away from a life of apathy toward friendship. When her mob boss wants her to shadow the unusual teenage woman she photographed walking out of the erratic star gate, she learns the secret of her blackouts. Boss Mead knows the teenager, whom Bolt soon realizes has whole different take on apathy, one that endangers her reporter friend, her horrible job, and likely the city itself.

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#WordWeavers 2025.07.17 — Your MC's boss has done a job performance appraisal, share a few details.

Hehehe. A "job performance appraisal," in not so many words, was the climatic scene in a short novel, before I rewrote it and added about 30% more content. Her actual boss (the main series antagonist) approves greatly of how the MC spent her last four years since running away, and knows a lot more about those years than the MC could have imagined. Despite the criminal activities the MC was involved in, what the boss sees is: She learned to fight smartly, became an effective thaumaturge, used her knowledge to help the individuals around her even if she didn't understand them (the MC is autistic), kept the people she was responsible for safe, and eventually guided a huge (albeit criminal) organization beyond a period of "disastrous mismanagement" with little loss of life while maintaining the peace. Temporarily taking over the "organization" included the ironic death of a woman that was trying to assassinate the main series antagonist; this might require a bonus!

The MC had thought the main series antagonist was evil before. Now, from her point of view, she's sure of it.

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#WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2025.07.17 — How much can a reader learn about an author through their works?

This worries me greatly.

I don't think that a reader can learn a lot about an author's public, or even private persona, from their stories unless the author intends it to be so. Hints maybe, philosophy likely, but about them? Not much. However, what leaks into the text (my text, anyway) is what most people severely censor, what if's we wouldn't approach "for reals." Fighting and the other f-word used as a verb, because readers want exciting stories—especially in genre fiction—that are NOT about the normal everyday people they know, or are. If you write murder mysteries, erotic fantasy, or vigilante adventure you are going to have to imagine being those people to write their stories, but this doesn't mean you murder people in a locked room, have a blazing libido, or use a .356 magnum to kill the criminals the police can't or won't.

My worry is that readers will think they understand me through my stories, and since my stories are more spicy these days than ever before, my self-censor is throwing fits and hysterics. I'm not my characters. I'm simply living the Walter Mitty life like every other reader, only more in control—though I'm sure people who ban books will be happy to tar me as advocating whatever offended them. Seems these days who you have sex with is far more important than the gun you conceal in your pants.

That's my thought on the subject, anyway. Note: I am still writing.

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#ScribesAndMakers 2025.07.17 — Tell us about a book you like despite its cover (don't show the cover yet.)

The elevator pitch is "Yentl in the future." Google Yentl. My novel†. An SF YA. Published years ago before I took the R.S. nom de plume.

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† I edited the post to be clear, Yentl is not my novel; I am simply not stating the title. Aren't the vagaries of English wonderful?

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@golgaloth

Is there a way to show representation that's not offensive?

Yes. Very definitely. Always? Probably not. Without adding additional weight to the word "controversial," remembering what's controversial is relative to the reader's POV and ultimately beyond the author's control, I try not to weight, color, heat, or highlight such things any more than any other miscellaneous fact would be. Can't say I always succeed, or it may be impossible. Indeed, the character may have their own agenda to stir the pot. I think it's best to represent people as people, and let story context carry the burden. Throwing firebombs gets you the audience that enjoys fireworks, not the ones you hope will hear your message.

Do you consider other people's feelings when you're writing?

This question is one of my bugaboos. My internal censor feels like it's drinking far too much caffeine of late. Writing dryly and a matter-of-factly about women who don't feel shame (as one example) keeps grating against the gender roles and norms I was socialized with, which I know full well were made to control my behavior to the benefit of a society that really doesn't care other than I don't make trouble.

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#WordWeavers 2025.07.16 — SC POV: What do you do to calm down when you’re angry?

[Bolt closes her eyes in obvious emotional pain. As tears gather in her eyelashes, the day angel wraps her upper body in her wings to hide as she talks:] My friend calls it anger management; 'parently I keep on inflicting "life lessons" on myself. As a dumb, stupid, ignorant fledgling, I didn't calm down; I acted out. Rarely listened, got myself into fun trouble that was still trouble all the same, flew with hunky guys who were no good, and generally made my family regret I'd been born. Haven't tried to contact 'em since I threw that brick through the Hauler Guild's window 'fer rejected me, and rolled that pretty van down a hill. Ya could say I got to the point of calming down by breaking things and people's trust in me.

Running from the law has the effect of ya losing the privilege to be protected by that same law. I… [coughs] Okay, bad things happened and I lost control of my life, including the bein' able to fight being controlled. Not a child no more. How did I calm down?

Turned it inward.

My friend calls it "apathy." A-pathy: means "not feelin'." Got to the point where I ceased remembering my life, worked through criminal things I had no choice but to do, and, well, felt so very little I'd've been happy ta have suddenly died. I lived to 27 years surprisingly fast feelin' surprisingly numb, most days (surprisingly) blacked out from memory.

Friends changed that. They pointed out the good things I also did, and helped me find new dreams beyond my restrictions. Now, surprisingly often, I find that I cry. [She has lowered her blue feathered wings as she's talked, and you see tears streaming down her cheeks.]

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#WordWeavers 2025.07.15 — How emotionally intelligent is your MC?

Referring to the definitions below: The devil-girl is very emotionally intelligent, or not emotionally intelligent at all.

She is intelligent enough to understand that her logical and mathematical intelligence doesn't cut it, which isn't at all helped by her being somewhat autistic. She knows she fails definition 1 below. However, she is very well trained, and has been trained from the age of five to be so, when she lost her family and ended up being raised by a guardian (a proxy for the main series antagonist)—until she ran away.

She could (and chooses to) convincingly act the part of definition number 2, including managing her own emotions no matter how infuriatingly stupid, stubborn, or vapid the vast majority of people she has had to deal with have turned out to be. Her internal dialogue is hilarious in this respect.

What she likes is being skilled, earning praise, and being challenged into learning something. What had been indoctrinated into her is that other people are like her, feel like her, and want normalacy like her (albeit differently), which is why she's unerringly willing to choose to "have the backs" of those she becomes responsible for. She's very skilled at putting herself in other's shoes.

Don't confuse this with empathy†. She occasionally toys with people, or acts with deadly logic. She doesn't tolerate continued stupidity for long. The "good" she has done thus far is by choice. Her choice. Forced to interact with people, she reframes the situation as being fun, or learning how to make it fun for herself.

emotional intelligence

noun

  1. Intelligence regarding the emotions, especially in the ability to monitor one's own or others' emotions.
  2. The ability, capacity, or skill to perceive, assess, and manage the emotions of oneself, of others, and of groups.

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† There's the empathy she demonstrates (the reader gets to decide) and the empathy she'll admit to (which is none). If you practice something long enough it becomes reflexive. She may or may not get this.

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@klepsydra

"Ask the next question"

Excellent Theodore Sturgeon reference, thank you. I sometimes refer to my fiction as similar to his, and those four words are great advice for any fiction author. Similar to the concept of "worsening;" when the narrative asks the next question whilst resolving the first, you pull the reader along intellectually not necessarily by something visceral like fear or worry does in worsening. Both good plot devices that can help when the plot is slumping.

I long ago attended a small seminar at Antioch featuring Theodore Sturgeon. Like many things I did when I was young, I did not value the opportunity enough; I have no notes or photographs, just the memory of being there.

> #WritersCoffeeClub #WCC 2025.07.16 — How often do you raise questions in your writing without intention to answer them?

The keywords are "without intention." How often without intention? That would be never intentionally.

However, I do intentionally raise questions in stories that could lead to a sequel (or prequel) where I would (I hope) answer them. I may do this early on, or add threads that are only apparent in the epilogue. I sometimes raise questions unintentionally, bits of worldbuilding or plot or a fanciful side character that nevertheless gets baked into the workings of the world. I can think of at least one instance where a reader called me out on this, causing me to write further stories as a result.

However, I prefer to find and fry up my red herrings—with onions, salt, and pepper, and enjoy a meal of kippers.

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Check out C.J. Baty

MM Action Adventure, Comedy, Contemporary, Erotic Romance, Fantasy, Gaylit, Historical, Holiday, Mystery, Paranormal, Suspense, Thriller

CJ Baty lives with her very patient husband and two encouraging adult children. The recent move to include a second home in Tennessee has fulfilled one of her life long dreams. ...

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#PennedPossibilities 728 — Write about something your antagonist (or villain) frequently forgets.

Rainy Days frequently forgets how difficult and painful giving birth is, especially when she's distracted in the moment.

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Time to share another author friend: Joseph Gorne

MM Fantasy, Mystery, Thriller

Joseph Gorne is a lifelong fan of fantasy, drawing characters and weaving outlandish stories for them one of his favorite pastimes. He resides in North Carolina with his husband as well as several impish, little bundles of fluff(read: cats). Creative endeavors ...

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So here I am about to throw out the 1st chapter of a novelette again. I realized that I can't simply depict directly the thoughts of a person whose dreams have been crushed. Bolt feels dead inside, lost in darkness, except when doing the few things allowed her that bring a glimmer of hope and light. The narrative must start as snapshots, apropos since it's street portrait photography that grabs her—until a friendly antagonist shines light and gives her new dreams.

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#PennedPossibilities 727 — MC POV: Do you remember your 21st birthday? Describe it as best you can.

The devil-girl pretty much spilled the beans about her age in The Wanted Poster in 1st person POV, which is pinned to my profile. Consider reading the 540 word tootfic for a taste of her autistic deadpan humor and the situations she fervently doesn't want to get into but does because she has the back of people she's responsible for, to a fault. As for her age, these two paragraphs set up and provide her answer.

[I] read [the wanted poster] further, "Wanted for questioning in regards to the Old Harbors Post Office and the Three Forks Bridge explosions. Suspected of transporting illegal goods and wanted persons, assault, racketeering, attempted murder, and terrorism. Goes by the name Gelding and other aliases. Aged between 15 and 35."

I muttered, "A two-decade range? I'm not even two decades old." I really worked on disguising myself, and it paid off.

She doesn't remember her 21st birthday, yet…

PS: The age of majority in her world is 24.

The Wanted Poster: eldritch.cafe/@sfwrtr/11013645

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Eldritch CaféRS, Author, Novelist, Prosaist (@sfwrtr@eldritch.cafe)#WritingWonders 4.3 — **The Wanted Poster** by R.S. Someone knocked with what proved to be a clipboard before coming into the conference room, and the various lieutenants' bodyguards stiffened. The thug still had a bandage over his eye and an arm in a sling as he walked in and discreetly handed the clipboard to me. I looked at the single page. "Not a joke?" I whispered, my mouth wide open. "No, Boss." The poster had official diffraction stripes with rainbow lettering. It displayed two images, one snapped after I'd shoved the boss down on the seat of the brougham as we fled the summit, less than a minute before the carriage exploded. It showed me in a hooded cape with my chin mask up, unluckily glowering at the lens. The second was a bank image. The scale showed my above average height. This time my hood was down for visibility and my hair up in a gangland bouffant. The chin mask was intact. Despite soot from the riots on my face, you could see my flattened nose and brushed eyebrows, but not the most important part. I escorted the boss past on the sidewalk. Between the crash gate grate and her having just darted to my right, you couldn't see her wings or face. You could identify the Old Harbors Post Office across the street by its century old architecture. Fortunately, the image of me drenched in blood that evening, the one under the headline in the morning edition, wasn't included. The constables hadn't made that connection, except to the extent that the first line of the wanted poster read, "*Detain for questioning by order of Rainy Days, Director of Home*". I shivered. The evil woman was too close to connecting the dots. I had to excise the Mustang elements that could take advantage of the chaos and to prevent the syndicate from spinning into internecine war. I was already responsible for too many deaths because I'd been too cowardly to do what I knew was right. This poster meant I had to disappear and leave the east coast sooner than later. It was if I watched my plausible deniability lining up at the window like a string of rats and, one by one, defenestrating itself. It read further, "*Wanted for questioning in regards to the Old Harbors Post Office and the Three Forks Bridge explosions. Suspected of transporting illegal goods and wanted persons, assault, racketeering, attempted murder, and terrorism. Goes by the name Gelding and other aliases. Aged between 15 and 35.*" I muttered, "A two-decade range? I'm not even two decades old." I really worked on disguising myself, and it paid off. "*High-level thaumaturge without a limiter. If apprehended, shackle to a hard surface to prevent escape. Consider dangerous. Reward for information leading to arrest: 2 years basic.*" I loved praise and grinned at being recognized as high-level, but added, "I'm not dangerous." South Beach snorted, then sat there her chest bouncing as she struggled with a hand over her mouth to hold in her laughter. I looked around the room. The men and women smiled, getting the joke, but others looked serious. Feathers made rustling noises. They knew I had the kiss of death. I grinned, handing the clipboard back to my thug secretary. "Burn that." "Yes, Boss." [Author retains copyright] #fiction #fantasy #sf #sff #sciencefiction #writing #writer #writers #author #writingcommunity #writersOfMastodon #except #flashfiction #BoostingIsSharing #CommentingIsCool